Thursday, July 9, 2009

Surrender

Find your rocky path
with somebody next to you
poetry, pleas and burning tears
will never get the message through
Breathing to you is leaving to me
so keep the full moon at bay:
Shine her promises on someone new
and watch me fade away
There is nothing else I can possibly do
There is nothing more I can say
I surrender, you win, you want it to end
at least that's what you said today...

2 comments:

  1. Never go away
    Stay to save my soul
    I love you so deeply
    I long for your warmth
    Please stay and fight the cold
    Stay until we use the time
    The time we have been promised

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  2. Wow! This one...I love replies in poetry form...the soft simplicity so got to me tonight. Post it among your others, Bear! Beautiful!

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